It is clear that to take risk is valuable for many individuals in both work life and professional life. However, taking risk has some advantages and disadvantages related to proffessional life and personal life.
There are some drawbacks for people to take a risk in their personal and professional life. For the former, daring consistantly may makes people feel burnout because risks poses a sense of uncertainity. This uncertain process ongoing every so often inhibits people to feel safe. For the latter, to take risk means to accept in the beginning such a terrible ends that irreparably damage people in work life. As a result of this, the individuals may go bank rupt and lost their job due to some risks they take.
On the other hand, taking risk brings some advantages to people's personal and professional lifes. To take risk makes people stronger. That is, people can be away form their comfor area by taking risk. To be remote from safety field give a chance to people to improve and deal with some problems. As a result of this, people feel themselves developed and people trust themselves to tackle many problems. At this point, the level of self-confidence can be increased so much that people may feel happy. In addition, people can encounter new opportunities as valuable as they may have a chance to advance their professional skills by taking risk.
In conlusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages in taking risk to either professional or personal life. However, I believe that the advantages are more noticeable than disadvantages.
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Most of this essay is vague! You need to learn about essay structure before tackling topics such as the above. It is not a particularly easy one. Essays need to present convincing/persuasive ideas and examples.
Take a look at my replies in the following threads to learn about essay structure (especially about the need to write general-to-specific body paragraphs).