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şeyma nur kayacan Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check my writing for task 2.


Nowadays, the majortiy of people has no idea about theirs neighbors. Also, the insight into a neighbor is extremly negative in the large cities. Hence, many people cannot feel a sense of unity and comminity. This issue is cameover with educating people.

To begin with, not build a relationship with neighboors led people to feel loneliness. Indeed, family is the first place for children to learn some things about life. Subsequently, second place for that can be neighborhood. Most people, particularly children, acquire many abilities from neighborhood by observing, communicating, sharing, and helping. Moreover, all of these behaviours make people feel a sense of unity and community. However, if people do not know any thing about theirs neighbors even names of them, these people cannot feel a sense of belonging to society. As a result of this, they have to deal with all problems alone.

To solve this important issue, to make people be aware of the significance of unity can be the most efficient way with education. Indeen, the main aim of education is to teach and reinforce the basic values, such as a sense of community, and modes of behaviour of public. Therefore, the importance of neighborhood can be taught in every where by being detailed. Thanks to that, many people can be pay more attention to know what the neighbor is about.

Concequently, neighborhood is the most essential element in people’s lives in terms of socialization. The lack of that can result for some social issues.

  
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