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Lê Thiên Hoàng Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please, check my writing and fix it.thanks
A middle school in US. Olive was a young girl, she was obedient with quiet living. Of course, nobody care to her. A day, Olive decided "trendsetter" herself by blowing the gossip about sex, erotic style... After, she turned into a sexy hot girl and easygoing girl. The plan had succeeded beyond her imagination. Recently, she had got the man's notice. She was became the focus from everyone.
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Middle school students are children, so it is not appropiiate to talk about them in sexual terms. I advise you to find another topic to write about.
- Middle school students are children, so it is not appropiiate to talk about them in sexual terms.
- I advise you to find another topic to write about.
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Middle school students are children, so it is not appropiiate to talk about them in sexual terms.
I advise you to find another topic to write about.
I advise you to find another topic to write about.
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