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Rashin Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check my writing

hello dears

I would be grateful if someone could check it out and explain the errors to me.


I went to India 2years ago and it was the last trip I took till now and it was a first foreign country that I ever saw It was amazing and there were a lot of different people Their culture their religion and.. were different from eachother And all that people with differences they live together And it was interesting to me that they built the mosque near the church and they respect each other's religion And my flight was near 6 hours And it was quite comfortable I went there alone but I had some friends in India before that I found them in some apps . So I just met them there. And I stayed in that country for 2 weeks mean 14 days And I saw amazing places Like the red fort in Delhi It's a popular tourist destination
And I bought a sari dress and it was the traditional dress of Hindu womenAnd the weather was great it was little cold but And the food was amazingly delicious. And wich food that I liked the most was biryani and it made by chicken andd..

And I've had fascinating moments there!!


????: I hope I will experience this travel in future but it wasn't real

and I got help from my knowledge and imagination .



cheers.

  

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Please post one or two sentences. It is easier to explain one or two errors at a time and more people will be willing to give you feedback.

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There are really too many errors to mark.

There is no ending punctuation so all the sentences run amuck.. You use "and" in front of and in the middle of nearly every sentence - 17 times in this short paragraph! That is exceedingly bad form.

I went to India 2years ago and it was the last trip I took

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