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Hello dear teachers that would be grateful if someone could check my text to find out my mistakes.

The last trip i took was utterly remarkable and exquisite given the fact that , i'm aware it was neither a ubiquitous trip nor experience! And not every body possesses this magnificent opportunity to try it!.to amplify further; the equipment that are required to be on this appealing trip is being a person who is as keen as mustard on studying space and discerning information about it !and eighter a phone or lap top! It begs the question that: how is that?. Well i know it's some what peculiar and intriguing simultaneously!.let's cut to the chase owning to the fact that I anticipate you can't wait any more to figure it out! First and more most you need a ticket as well as all types of trips! This ticket costs 500 000 Tooman ,to examine more a professor that has an old hand in teaching space demonstrates an expect of universe to you through the most qualified and exhilarating telescope also, he enables you to ask numerous and varied questions associated with space! All of this trip is online and exceedingly engrossing and fascinating! In additional to that; you can experience it twice a year if you are are lucky enough to be able to get a ticket due to the fact that, a plethora of zealous people require a ticket!. I really couldn't tear myself a way and i did live and breath it...

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Rashin

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

The letter " i " is the ninth letter of the alphabet. It is not a real person, but a letter on a page. Being one of the five vowels, with "a," "e," "o," and "u ", it is an important letter, much more than "q" or "k", but still it has no beliefs, feelings or opinions.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

I have highlighted the text with grammatical errors, punctuation errors, word usage errors and spelling errors.
I did not really understand much about the trip you are describing; there were so many mistakes that it was difficult to figure out what you were saying.

"Begs the question" is often misused, and you have done that. It does not mean "raise the question". It is a logical fallacy where the starting premise is either false or it is a restatement of the proof.

For example, this is a proof that is an example of "begging the question."

1. Everything that is made from natural plants is healthy food.
2. Mushrooms are natural plants.
3. Mushrooms are healthy.

(Except for the poisonous ones that can kill you.)

The Apple iPhone is the best smartphone on the planet because no one makes a better smartphone than Apple does.

The last trip i took was utterly remarkable and exquisite given the fact that , i'm aware it was neither a ubiquitous trip nor experience! And not every body possesses this magnificent opportunity to try it!.to amplify further; the equipment that are required to be on this appealing trip is being a person who is as keen as mustard on studying space and discerning information about it !and eighter a phone or lap top! It begs the question that: how is that?. Well i know it's some what peculiar and intriguing simultaneously!.let's cut to the chase owning to the fact that I anticipate you can't wait any more to figure it out! First and more most you need a ticket as well as all types of trips! This ticket costs 500 000 Tooman ,to examine more a professor that has an old hand in teaching space demonstrates an expect of universe to you through the most qualified and exhilarating telescope also, he enables you to ask numerous and varied questions associated with space! All of this trip is online and exceedingly engrossing and fascinating! In additional to that; you can experience it twice a year if you are are lucky enough to be able to get a ticket due to the fact that, a plethora of zealous people require a ticket!. I really couldn't tear myself a way and i did live and breath it...

Rashin · Answer

Hello dear teachers

I would be grateful if someone could especificly shed the light upon grammatical mistakes and Word usage errors I need explanation more about them.

thanks in advance

The last trip I took was utterly remarkable

and exquisite given the fact that , I'm aware it was neither a ubiquitous trip nor experience! And no one possesses this magnificent opportunity

to try it!.to amplify further; the equipment that are required to be on this appealing trip is being a person who is as keen as mustard on studying space and discerning information about it !and eighter a phone or lap top! It begs the question that: how is that?. Well i know it's some what peculiar and intriguing simultaneously!.let's cut to the chase owning to the fact that I anticipate you can't wait any more to figure it out! First and more most you need a ticket as well as all types of trips! This ticket costs 500 000 Tooman ,to examine more a professor that has an old hand in teaching space demonstrates an expect of universe to you through the most qualified and exhilarating telescope also, he enables you to ask numerous and varied questions associated with space! All of this trip is online and exceedingly engrossing and fascinating! In additional to that; you can experience it twice a year if you are are lucky enough to be able to get a ticket due to the fact that, a plethora of zealous people require a ticket!. I really couldn't tear myself a way and i did live and breath it...

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