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No. I don’t agree with that option. In the country, every individual has a capable difference to make money. We can’t limit the amount of money people can earn. The amount of money that comparable with their effort. We limit the amount of money that is not fair for everyone. One worker doesn’t earn money than the CEO whose effort is very much comparable worker. Example: The worker performs an assignment, the CEO manages all assignment worker performs. So, the amount of money a worker earns less than the CEO because of whose responsibility than workers. If the government limits the amount people can earn, person effort will be limited. People value also is limited. Everyone doesn’t develop themself. They are always facing one barrier from the government. Most people presume money is an effort to work. Money is important in everyone’s life. It shouldn’t limit by anything or anyone. Money motivates life development. Anyone also needs money for life, earn much money better for life. Tax from your money also helps the government to create social welfare for people. Children are studying at school is built from tax of yours.

  

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn?

  • In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries.
  • Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn?
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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries.

Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that

the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn?

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