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The nurse clutches her head in frustration, and as she lets go of the wheelchair, Chris infuriated starts wheeling towards Patrick. The nurse runs after him, but can't catch up as Chris is pumping the wheels of his chair wildly, picking up crazy speed, barreling towards Patrick. Patrick dives out of the way just in time to avoid Chris, who instead goes on to crash violently into an old lady with a walker.
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anonymous The nurse clutches her head in frustration, and as she lets go of the wheelchair, Chri s, infuriate d, starts wheeling towards Patrick. The nurse runs after hi m b ut can't catch up as Chris is pumping the wheels of his chair wildly, picking up crazy speed, barreling towards Patrick. Patrick dives out of the way just in time to avoid Chris, who instead goes on to crash violently into an old lady with a walker.
- anonymous The nurse clutches her head in frustration, and as she lets go of the wheelchair, Chri s, infuriate d, starts wheeling towards Patrick.
- The nurse runs after hi m b ut can't catch up as Chris is pumping the wheels of his chair wildly, picking up crazy speed, barreling towards Patrick.
- Patrick dives out of the way just in time to avoid Chris, who instead goes on to crash violently into an old lady with a walker.
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anonymousThe nurse clutches her head in frustration, and as she lets go of the wheelchair, Chris, infuriated, starts wheeling towards Patrick. The nurse runs after him but can't catch up as Chris is pumping the wheels of his chair wildly, pickin
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