Please check my writing

Please check my writing below. Is there anything that I could improve? Word choices? Punctuation? Anything?

(Info: Marcus is up in a tree. Ben is on the ground.)

...when suddenly the tree starts to tip over. Marcus jumps for another tree as Ben, too, jumps for his life as the tree falls to the ground and misses him by inches. Ben recovers from the scare, and looks up to see Marcus hanging from a branch, trying to pull himself up.