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The bar chart indicates the proportion of male and the counterpart who did exercises frequently according to their ages in Australia . It is clear that, women did physical activities far more than men. Moreover, females in 45 to 54 group possessed the highest figure during the research period.

It is noticeable that , in 25 to 64 groups, the proportion of female doing exercises regularly was far larger than the counterpart. The most significant figure was from the proportion of women in 45 to 54 group with more than 53%, while only around 43% male. Moreover, the 35 to 44 group witnessed a tremendous difference between men and women, with 52% female was said to do sport frequently, but under 39.5% men did.

However, in the youngest group, the proportion of male was slightly higher than the counterpart, with over 52.8% and 47.7% respectively. In addition, both genders from over 65 group hold closely the same figure with 47%.