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MIG Posted 13 years ago
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"Either day or night, we are ready to fight" that was a slogan that soldiers were repeatedly shouting after their captain while crossing in front of me in the OLD BAZAAR. But their face and sound were not in harmony with their show. Apparently they were trying their best but obviously they didn't play well because natives were inattentively keep doing what they were doing.This was the first scene that I was seeing right after getting off the cart.
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I have highlighted some of the errors: "Either day or night, we are ready to fight" that was a slogan that soldiers were repeatedly shouting after their captai n while crossing in front of me in the OLD BAZAAR. But their face and sound were not in harmony with their show. Apparently they were trying their bes t but obviously they didn't play well because natives were inattentively keep doing what they were doing.
- I have highlighted some of the errors: "Either day or night, we are ready to fight" that was a slogan that soldiers were repeatedly shouting after their captai n while crossing in front of me in the OLD BAZAAR.
- But their face and sound were not in harmony with their show.
- Apparently they were trying their bes t but obviously they didn't play well because natives were inattentively keep doing what they were doing.
- This was the first scene that I was seeing right after getting off the cart.
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I have highlighted some of the errors:
"Either day or night, we are ready to fight" that was a slogan that soldiers were repeatedly shouting after their captain while crossing in front of me in the OLD BAZAAR. But their face and
"Either day or night, we are ready to fight" that was a slogan that soldiers were repeatedly shouting after their captain while crossing in front of me in the OLD BAZAAR. But their face and
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Thank you AlpheccaStars.
"Either day or night, we are ready to fight", It
"Either day or night, we are ready to fight", It
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Not quite.
"Either day or night, we are ready to fight." (full stop - this is a sentence)
That (begin a new sentence) was a slogan that soldiers were repeatedly shouting after their captain, while crossing in front of me in the OLD BAZAAR.
"Either day or night, we
"Either day or night, we are ready to fight." (full stop - this is a sentence)
That (begin a new sentence) was a slogan that soldiers were repeatedly shouting after their captain, while crossing in front of me in the OLD BAZAAR.
"Either day or night, we
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Thank you AlpheccaStars for your detailed answer.
Grammar aside, what is your opinion about the story?
1 to10, which one is
Grammar aside, what is your opinion about the story?
1 to10, which one is
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There are some aspects to your paragraph that are not natural English.
"Natives" is rather derogatory, and probably not the word you want to use.
I would use "perform" and not "play." Play means having fun. It does not seem that the soldiers were having fun.
The story is incomplete, but it is a good beginning. The reader wonders how the soldiers faces were not in harmon
"Natives" is rather derogatory, and probably not the word you want to use.
I would use "perform" and not "play." Play means having fun. It does not seem that the soldiers were having fun.
The story is incomplete, but it is a good beginning. The reader wonders how the soldiers faces were not in harmon
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Wow thank you.
I didn't expect this.
Your suggestions are very instructive and encouraging.
I will definitely consider
I didn't expect this.
Your suggestions are very instructive and encouraging.
I will definitely consider
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