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MIG Posted 12 years ago
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Hi. Could someone please check my wording below?

Seeing that In front of his stall was sprinkled with water, evoked my childhood memories, when every morning on my way to school I saw him doing that but now he wasn't there anymore it was his loyal worker keeping on his late boss's habit.
  

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The water sprinkled in front of his stall evoked my childhood memory of seeing him doing that every morning on my way to school. But he is no longer there; it was his loyal employee retaining his late boss's habit.

  • The water sprinkled in front of his stall evoked my childhood memory of seeing him doing that every morning on my way to school.
  • But he is no longer there; it was his loyal employee retaining his late boss's habit.
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The water sprinkled in front of his stall evoked my childhood memory of seeing him doing that every morning on my way to school. But he is no longer there; it was his loyal employee retaining his late boss's habit.
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Thank you very very much Mister Micawber.Emotion: smile

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