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MIG Posted 13 years ago
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Please check the wording below.

Many years ago, After watching "The Joy of Painting" TV program—My father start to believing that oil painting is just like that—a less than hour job. Even now, after these all years—he still thinks that I am Lazy, because it takes me weeks or months to finish an oil painting. However I love Bob Ross, but I have to say that I am a victim of his talent, somehow.
  

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Many years ago, a fter watching "The Joy of Painting" TV program , m y father start to believ e that oil painting is just like that (? what he saw) — a less-than-an- hour 's job. Even now, after these all years , he still thinks that I am l azy, because it takes me weeks or months to finish an oil painting.

— AlpheccaStars

  • Many years ago, a fter watching "The Joy of Painting" TV program , m y father start to believ e that oil painting is just like that (?
  • what he saw) — a less-than-an- hour 's job.
  • Even now, after these all years , he still thinks that I am l azy, because it takes me weeks or months to finish an oil painting.
  • However , I love Bob Ross, but I have to say that I am a victim of his talent, somehow.
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Many years ago, after watching "The Joy of Painting" TV program, my father start to believe that oil painting is just like that (? what he saw) — a less-than-an-hour's job. Even now, after these all years,
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Thank you AlpheccaStars.
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Aren't you talking about the past? I would use "started".
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ozzourtiAren't you talking about the past? I would use "started".
Yes.Emotion: embarrassed
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MIGWould you please tell me why it is wrong to write "starts"? Isn't "father" a third person?
Sorry, it was a mistake that I overlooked. I'm glad you spotted it.
However, it should be past tense.

Are you an artist?
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Thank you AlpheccaStars. Emotion: coffee
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AlpheccaStarsAre you an artist?
Sorry, I didn't see that.
I think artist is a "strong" word. I recognize myself as a "Graphic designer" who have artistic hobbies.
I am very interested in "story tellin
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