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Autominus Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Please check my two paragraphs of cover letter
Hi,
I am rewriting my two paragraphs. Could you please check and correct my writing?
I am an IT professional with extensive experience in the areas of network and systems administration, network infrastructure design and project management. I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment. I am always looking for new ways to automate and improve existing services. Furthermore, I am able to apply academic knowledge combined with my passion for informatics to field more productively. I also have achieved consistent and remarkable results in the execution and completion of IT solutions projects.
In addition, I have a variety of leadership, communications, motivational, team building and analytical skills. I enjoy helping and inspiring diverse groups to work towards a common goal, using my ability to understand, negotiate and resolve conflicting needs. Now, I would like to bring my knowledge and expertise to your company.
Also, any suggestion or modification from you will be of great help for me.
Your help will be appreciated greatly.
I am rewriting my two paragraphs. Could you please check and correct my writing?
I am an IT professional with extensive experience in the areas of network and systems administration, network infrastructure design and project management. I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment. I am always looking for new ways to automate and improve existing services. Furthermore, I am able to apply academic knowledge combined with my passion for informatics to field more productively. I also have achieved consistent and remarkable results in the execution and completion of IT solutions projects.
In addition, I have a variety of leadership, communications, motivational, team building and analytical skills. I enjoy helping and inspiring diverse groups to work towards a common goal, using my ability to understand, negotiate and resolve conflicting needs. Now, I would like to bring my knowledge and expertise to your company.
Also, any suggestion or modification from you will be of great help for me.
Your help will be appreciated greatly.
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Very good. I have only a few suggestions: I am an IT professional with extensive experience in network and systems administration, network infrastructure design and project management. I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment.
- Very good.
- I have only a few suggestions: I am an IT professional with extensive experience in network and systems administration, network infrastructure design and project management.
- I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment.
- I am always looking for new ways to automate and improve existing services.
- Furthermore, I am able to apply academic knowledge and my passion for informatics productively .
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Very good. I have only a few suggestions:
I am an IT professional with extensive experience in network and systems administration, network infrastructure design and project management. I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment. I am always looking for new ways to automate and impro
I am an IT professional with extensive experience in network and systems administration, network infrastructure design and project management. I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment. I am always looking for new ways to automate and impro
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