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Yobib Nartea Posted 12 years ago
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Please check my Thesis Statement!
Thesis Statement
My topic is about cultural geographers and ¨othering¨ (identity construction)
-> Cultural geographers believe that identity construction and ¨othering¨can help understand the diffusion of language and religion among different people, however there is a strong evidence to suggest that identity construction reveal larger issues relating to racial discrimination and social inequalities.
Thank you in advance
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My topic is about cultural geographers and ¨othering¨ (identity construction)
-> Cultural geographers believe that identity construction and ¨othering¨can help understand the diffusion of language and religion among different people, however there is a strong evidence to suggest that identity construction reveal larger issues relating to racial discrimination and social inequalities.
Thank you in advance
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It seems too long. It's a run-on sentence. You need a period before 'However', and a capital letter.
- It seems too long.
- It's a run-on sentence.
- You need a period before 'However', and a capital letter.
- I get the feeling that your thesis really involves what you are saying in the second sentence.
- You need to try again.
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It seems too long.
It's a run-on sentence. You need a period before 'However', and a capital letter.
I get the feeling that your thesis really involves what you are saying in the second sentence.
You need to try again.
Clive
It's a run-on sentence. You need a period before 'However', and a capital letter.
I get the feeling that your thesis really involves what you are saying in the second sentence.
You need to try again.
Clive
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