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Hannah Anh Posted 5 years ago
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Please check my task 1 essay (map). Thank you!

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pictures illustrate some changes of a public park as it was in the year 1920 compared to the present day.

Overall, the most significant changes involved new constructions for the entertainment area, a few relocations in terms of seating, and the elimination of unnecessary features.

In 1920, a water fountain was situated in the center of the park, which was removed later to make space for a rose garden with surrounding seats for visitors. Furthermore, a stage with two seating areas for musical performance, and a minor rose garden in 1920 were now replaced by an amphitheater in the west of the park. The pond for water plants and a rose garden were abolished to make way for a cafe and a playground for children. Finally, a new water feature with a parking space built underneath are now placed in the southeast of the park, where a glasshouse was there in 1920. No changes were made to the entrances and a minor garden.

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