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The table presents the number of travellers and the reasons for travel from the year 1994 to 1998, while the bar chart describes their places of travel within those years.

Overall, there was an increasing trend of travelling over the course of 5 years from 1994 with holiday being the number one reason. Additionally, the most chosen destination was Western Europe, then other areas, and finally North America.

Aside from the year 1995, all the other three years showed an increase in the number of tourists, rising from around 22,000 to just under 29,000 in 5 years. The most answered reason for travelling was holiday with over 15,000 people and grew gradually by 5,000 over 5 years. The second and third positions belonged to business travel and relatives visiting, respectively, with small differences of around 500 to 800 travellers. Only a small proportion of approximately 1,000 people travelled due to other reasons during this period.

Among all the three destinations, Western Europe was the top choice with less than 20,000 tourists in 1994 to almost 25,000 after 5 years. In 1994, the number of travellers in North America was only half of that of other areas. However, it almost caught up in 1998 with less than 3,000 people went to each place.

(This is the first time I face a task with 2 different types of figures. Please correct me as best as you can. Thank you)