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Mr1bin Posted 15 years ago
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Q. Describe a typical meal you would have for dinner.
My answer.
I usually eat a simple Korean dish, which is Kimbob for dinner. It is made from seaweed, a variety of vegetables and hams. It is very easy to eat and takes very short time to finish the meal. As I am a teacher, I don’t have enough time to go and sit in a restaurant. So I usually order Kimbob to my school.
Thank you very much!
My answer.
I usually eat a simple Korean dish, which is Kimbob for dinner. It is made from seaweed, a variety of vegetables and hams. It is very easy to eat and takes very short time to finish the meal. As I am a teacher, I don’t have enough time to go and sit in a restaurant. So I usually order Kimbob to my school.
Thank you very much!
Top answer
I usually eat a simple Korean dish, Kimbob, for dinner. It is made from seaweed, a variety of vegetables, and ham. It is very easy to eat, so it does not take long to finish the meal.
- I usually eat a simple Korean dish, Kimbob, for dinner.
- It is made from seaweed, a variety of vegetables, and ham.
- It is very easy to eat, so it does not take long to finish the meal.
- As a teacher, I don't have enough time to go to and sit in a restaurant, so I usually have Kimbob delivered to the school.
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I usually eat a simple Korean dish, Kimbob, for dinner. It is made from seaweed, a variety of vegetables, and ham. It is very easy to eat, so it does not take long to finish the meal. As a teacher, I don't have enough time to go to and sit in a restaurant, so I usually have Kimbob delivered to the school.
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Thank you very much but I want to add fish cake soup! below is the modified answer.
I usually eat simple Korean dishes such as Kimbob and fish cake soup for dinner. Kimbob is made from seaweed, a variety of vegetables, and ham. They are very easy to eat, so they do not take long to finish the meal. As a teacher, I don't have enough time to go to and sit in a restaurant, so I usually hav
I usually eat simple Korean dishes such as Kimbob and fish cake soup for dinner. Kimbob is made from seaweed, a variety of vegetables, and ham. They are very easy to eat, so they do not take long to finish the meal. As a teacher, I don't have enough time to go to and sit in a restaurant, so I usually hav
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I usually eat simple Korean dishes such as Kimbob and fish cake soup for dinner. Kimbob is made from seaweed, a variety of vegetables, and ham. As a teacher, I don't have enough time to go to restaurant to eat, so I usually have Kimbob and fish cake soup delivered to the school. They are very easy to eat, so it does
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Awesome sir! I am not 100% sure but "it does" is correct not "they don't" thank you very much
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"They are very easy to eat, so they do not take long to finish the meal." implies that the subjects (they) mentioned in the previous half of the sentence are performing the action on the meal. Your food would seem to be eating itself. I'm sure you don't mean that.
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"They are very easy to eat, so they do not take long to finish the meal."
They are very easy to be eaten, so it does not take long to finish the meal.
is it better? thx for the quickest reply !!
They are very easy to be eaten, so it does not take long to finish the meal.
is it better? thx for the quickest reply !!
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"They are easily eaten, so it does not take long to finish the meal." sounds better.
Make it a habit of reading your sentences silently and aloud. Many sentences can be written to grammatical perfection and still sound cumbersome or odd when said aloud.
By the way, you're doing very well. Keep it up.
Make it a habit of reading your sentences silently and aloud. Many sentences can be written to grammatical perfection and still sound cumbersome or odd when said aloud.
By the way, you're doing very well. Keep it up.
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can I call that you are my savior? thanks very much!
"They are very easy to eat, so they do not take long to finish the meal." vs
"They are easily eaten, so it does not take long to finish the meal."
are both acceptable? or 2nd one is better? : )
"They are very easy to eat, so they do not take long to finish the meal." vs
"They are easily eaten, so it does not take long to finish the meal."
are both acceptable? or 2nd one is better? : )
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No need for savior talk. Knowledge is meant to shared, and I'm happy to do so.
The first sentence is incorrect. The second
The first sentence is incorrect. The second
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I really apprectiate it! I just uploaded another question, hoooo...
You know? To study English is endless : )
If you can, please answer my another question as well!!
(If you want to learn Korean, I will be your best teacher)
You know? To study English is endless : )
If you can, please answer my another question as well!!
(If you want to learn Korean, I will be your best teacher)
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