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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Please, check my slogan

Hi, everybody. I have to edit a leaflet for a new product. Is this sentence correct?
"NAME OF THE PRODUCT: TO BE THE NUMBER ONE IN SAFETY TOO."
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" NAME OF THE PRODUCT: FOR BEING THE NUMBER ONE IN SAFETY TOO"
Every suggestion will be welcomed.
Thank you
  

Top answer

Neither of those is good as a slogan. Try this: [Product Name]: Number one in safety too !

— Mister Micawber

  • Neither of those is good as a slogan.
  • Try this: [Product Name]: Number one in safety too !
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Neither of those is good as a slogan. Try this:

[Product Name]: Number one in safety too!
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