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Mr1bin Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please check my short essay if there are some mistakes
I prefer taking trip by myself than with a tour group.
First of all, I am very creative and energetic.
So if I travel in a group led by a tour guide, I can't go where i really want to go.
Addtionally, when I reach the place that I really like, if I am with tour group, i cant stay and spend more time in that place.
Also, Treveling by my self is more efficient to save my money.
If I make plan for trip myself, I dont need to waste my money to tour guides.
When I travelled with my friends, I made plan of trip.
As a result this planning, i could save our money efficiently.
Thank you : )
that's why i prefer traveling by my self.
First of all, I am very creative and energetic.
So if I travel in a group led by a tour guide, I can't go where i really want to go.
Addtionally, when I reach the place that I really like, if I am with tour group, i cant stay and spend more time in that place.
Also, Treveling by my self is more efficient to save my money.
If I make plan for trip myself, I dont need to waste my money to tour guides.
When I travelled with my friends, I made plan of trip.
As a result this planning, i could save our money efficiently.
Thank you : )
that's why i prefer traveling by my self.
Top answer
mr1bin, Here are my suggestions: In formal writing, (usually in essays) write out contractions like "that's" as "that is". I prefer taking trips by myself rather than with a tour group. First of all, I am very creative and energetic.
- mr1bin, Here are my suggestions: In formal writing, (usually in essays) write out contractions like "that's" as "that is".
- I prefer taking trips by myself rather than with a tour group.
- First of all, I am very creative and energetic.
- If I travel in a group led by a tour guide, I can't go where I really want to go.
- Additionally, when I reach the place that I really like, if I am with a tour group, I can’t stay and spend more time in that place.
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mr1bin,
Here are my suggestions:
In formal writing, (usually in essays) write out contractions like "that's" as "that is".
I prefer taking trips by myself rather than with a tour group. First of all, I am very creative and energetic. If I travel in a group led by a tour guide, I can't go where I really want to go. Additionally, when I reach the place that I really li
Here are my suggestions:
In formal writing, (usually in essays) write out contractions like "that's" as "that is".
I prefer taking trips by myself rather than with a tour group. First of all, I am very creative and energetic. If I travel in a group led by a tour guide, I can't go where I really want to go. Additionally, when I reach the place that I really li
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