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Ztq3 Posted 14 years ago
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Please check my sentences. Thank you.

XYZ management has accounts receivable-misc. balance of $xxx.xx as of October 10, 2012. Please review attached detail. Janitorial expenses were paid by XYZ. Please advise who will reimburse these expenses to XYZ.
  

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Hi, XYZ management has accounts receivable-misc. xx as of October 10, 2012. Please review attached detail.

— Clive

  • Hi, XYZ management has accounts receivable-misc.
  • xx as of October 10, 2012.
  • Please review attached detail.
  • Janitorial expenses were paid by XYZ.
  • Please advise who will reimburse these expenses to XYZ T his all seems too wordy to me.
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Hi,

XYZ management has accounts receivable-misc. balance of $***.xx as of October 10, 2012. Please review attached detail. Janitorial expenses were paid by XYZ. Please advise who will reimburse these expenses to XYZ

This all seems too wordy to me.
I suggest simply this.
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