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Sweety10 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

please check my sentences for grammatical errors

Is there any way you could get all my teeth even? All my teeth look real jagged.

My teeth are a disaster. I need a makeover to make my teeth look nice.

I'm in a great agony. I had a root canal yday and the pain is excruciating.

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You should change "real" to "very" in the second sentence. Some compound sentences would make the writing flow more smoothly. You should always double space after a period.

— Anonymous

  • You should change "real" to "very" in the second sentence.
  • Some compound sentences would make the writing flow more smoothly.
  • You should always double space after a period.
  • Using "makeover" and "make" in the same sentence seems redundant.
  • " Also, change "yday" to yesterday.
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You should change "real" to "very" in the second sentence. Some compound sentences would make the writing flow more smoothly. You should always double space after a period. Using "makeover" and "make" in the same sentence seems redundant. Perhaps you could say, "I need a makeover so my teeth will look nice." Also, change "yday" to yesterday.
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Anonymous You should always double space after a period.
This is old advice, and generally a single space after a period is practiced now. It's a matter of style, not grammar.

I agree with the other comments, except I don't object to "makeover" and "make" - although I like the suggested revision.
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Are these sentences correct?

After Marko had spent his holiday in Rome he wanted to learn Italian.
Sandra phoned her mother at work before she had left for New York.
Susan turned on the radio after she had cleaned the bathroom.
When she arrived the play had already been started.
After the man came home he had feed the cat.
Before he sang a song he had played the guit
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Hi,

The Present Perfect is not normally used in cases where the sequence of events is clear without it. Words like 'before' and 'after' usually make the sequence clear with Simple Past Tense.

eg After Marko spent his holiday in Rome, he wanted to learn Italian.
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