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Ztq3 Posted 12 years ago
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We will prepare a release of liability agreement and will ask John on behalf of XYZ company to sign it. Then we will deliver the money to your office in exchange of the release of liability agreement signed by John.

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Better is eg We will prepare a release of liability agreement and will ask John to sign it on behalf of XYZ . Then we will deliver the money to your office in exchange for it. But I don't understand.

— Clive

  • Better is eg We will prepare a release of liability agreement and will ask John to sign it on behalf of XYZ .
  • Then we will deliver the money to your office in exchange for it.
  • But I don't understand.
  • It sounds like 'we' have both the agreement and the money.
  • Is that right?
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Better is
eg We will prepare a release of liability agreement and will ask John to sign it on behalf of XYZ . Then we will deliver the money to your office in exchange for it.

But I don't understand. It sounds like 'we' have both the agreement and the money. Is that right?

Clive
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We will return the money in exchange of John signing the agreement we prepared. If my message is not clear, can you please revise it.? Thank you Clive
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in exchange for John signing the agreement
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Is this also correct?
In exchange for the release of liability agreement signed by John.
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Thank you Clive.
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