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Hopemoun Posted 12 years ago
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please check my sentences
It was an wonderful visit in my life. Last year I visited Mijoram state in India. I heard about this beautiful scenery but its unimagined when I saw this. I met some wonderful people in there. Love to visit again Mijoram next year.
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Last year I visited Mijoram state in India. It was a wonderful visit. I heard about its beautiful scenery, but it was unimaginable!
- Last year I visited Mijoram state in India.
- It was a wonderful visit.
- I heard about its beautiful scenery, but it was unimaginable!
- I met some wonderful people there.
- I'd love to visit again Mijoram next year.
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Last year I visited Mijoram state in India. It was a wonderful visit. I heard about its beautiful scenery, but it was unimaginable! I met some wonderful people there. I'd love to visit again Mijoram next year.
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thank u. Would you like to explain why my sentences are incorrect !~ It was an wonderful visit in my life. Last year I visited Mijoram state in India.'
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1. They were in the wrong order, logically, so 'it' has no apparent referent.
2. 'Wonderful' begins with a consonant sound.
3. Every personal experience is 'in your life': some are more wonderful and some are less wonderful.
4. 'You' is so spelled.
2. 'Wonderful' begins with a consonant sound.
3. Every personal experience is 'in your life': some are more wonderful and some are less wonderful.
4. 'You' is so spelled.
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