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Ztq3 Posted 13 years ago
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I think Leni’s film “Triumph of the Will” is a National Socialist propaganda and trying to promote the Nazi party. In the film, it only shows how nice Hitler was to the people. Hitler shook hands to women and some children. In addition, people praise, respect, and adore him for being a good leader. It also shows in the film that people were having fun and happy during the parade. I thought the film will also shows the bad things Hitler has done to the people.
  

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I think Leni’s film “Triumph of the Will” is National Socialist propaganda promoting the **** party. It shows only how nice Hitler was to the people. Hitler shook hands with women and children.

— Mister Micawber

  • I think Leni’s film “Triumph of the Will” is National Socialist propaganda promoting the **** party.
  • It shows only how nice Hitler was to the people.
  • Hitler shook hands with women and children.
  • People praise, respect, and adore him for being a good leader.
  • The film also shows happy people having fun during the parade.
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I think Leni’s film “Triumph of the Will” is National Socialist propaganda promoting the **** party. It shows only how nice Hitler was to the people. Hitler shook hands with women and children. People praise, respect, and adore him for being a good leader. The film also shows happy people having fun during the parade. I thought the film would also show the bad things Hitler did to the people.
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Thank you so much Mistermicawber!
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In this kind of context, we don't usually refer to people only by their first name. If you simply say 'Leni', it sounds a bit like she was your friend.

Say I think Leni Riefenstahl’s film “Triumph of the Will” is . . .

Clive
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OK I will change it. Thank you Clive.
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