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Flower1234 Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check my sentences

Teacher, please for errors. Thank you. Is there another word to replace "wherein"? It does not sound natural.

I write further to my email of August 1, 2012 wherein I said I would come in to work at 10 a.m. There is a change of plans so I will be working my normal work hours of 9 a.m. to 5 p.m.
  

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Hi, You could say eg 'in which'. Your whole text sounds very stiff and formal. Is that your intention?.

— Clive

  • Hi, You could say eg 'in which'.
  • Your whole text sounds very stiff and formal.
  • Is that your intention?.
  • Clive
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Hi,

You could say eg 'in which'.

Your whole text sounds very stiff and formal. Is that your intention?.

Clive
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