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Flower1234 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please check my sentences

Teacher, please check my paragraphs. I am writing my diary. Thank you.

This company has over 100 staff and this is my first time working in such a big company. It is a big change for me as for the past years I worked only in small companies where there were about 10 to 20 persons. I have yet to learn the names of my colleagues working near my station. There are numerous procedures to follow in terms of incoming mail and photocopying documents. I hope this new job works out well for me and I will like the people and my job. I missed my former colleagues.
  

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Good. I have only changed a couple of things: This company has over 100 staff and this is my first time working in such a big company. It is a big change for me , as for the past [ number ] years I worked only in small companies where there were about 10 to 20 employees .

  • Good.
  • I have only changed a couple of things: This company has over 100 staff and this is my first time working in such a big company.
  • It is a big change for me , as for the past [ number ] years I worked only in small companies where there were about 10 to 20 employees .
  • I have yet to learn the names of my colleagues working near my station.
  • There are numerous procedures to follow in terms of incoming mail and photocopying documents.
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Good. I have only changed a couple of things:

This company has over 100 staff and this is my first time working in such a big company. It is a big change for me, as for the past [number] years I worked only in small companies where there were about 10 to 20 employees. I have yet to learn the names of my colleagues working near my station. There are nume

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