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Poppyman Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Please, check my sentences.

Greetings!

I have little doubts about my sentences so I highlighted the words that I'm not quite sure of. Here are my sentences:

They have a car, tents and everything that they may need (when)going camping.

I don't consider my birthday something special since I turned 18.

I watched this movie as it was being shown in theatres. (I mean that I watched that movie once it was available in theatres).

Especially they laughed at the moment when one of the little girls was hung up by her hairs in the air.

Thank you so very much for helping in advance!
  

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They have a car, tents, and everything they may need when going camping. I have n't considered my birthday any thing special since I turned 18. I watched this movie [as it was being shown / as soon as it was being shown] in theatres.

— CalifJim

  • They have a car, tents, and everything they may need when going camping.
  • I have n't considered my birthday any thing special since I turned 18.
  • I watched this movie [as it was being shown / as soon as it was being shown] in theatres.
  • They laughed [most / especially hard] when one of the little girls was suspended by her hair in midair.
  • CJ
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They have a car, tents, and everything they may need when going camping.

I haven't considered my birthday anything special since I turned 18.

I watched this movie [as it was being shown / as soon as it was being shown] in theatres.

They laughed [most / especially hard] when one of the little girls was suspended by her hair in midair.

CJ
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Thanks a lot! Much obliged for your help.
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