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Osmancataloluk Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
please check my sentence,regards
STAIRWAY
The wide stairway at the back was worn out and partly damaged; it started from the game field and went up, at the top, it leveled with Palace Street.
The wide stairway at the back was worn out and partly damaged; it started from the game field and went up, at the top, it leveled with Palace Street.
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The wide stairway at the back was worn out and partly damaged; it started from the game field and went up. At the top, it leveled with Palace Street. The sentences are well-written, as most of your writing is, but I cannot picture this scene at all.
- The wide stairway at the back was worn out and partly damaged; it started from the game field and went up.
- At the top, it leveled with Palace Street.
- The sentences are well-written, as most of your writing is, but I cannot picture this scene at all.
- It's confusing.
- Your writing is not usually confusing.
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The wide stairway at the back was worn out and partly damaged; it started from the game field and went up. At the top, it leveled with Palace Street.
The sentences are well-written, as most of your writing is, but I cannot picture this scene at all. It's confusing. Your writing is not usually confusing. You do have a gift for writing in English, though, and I encourage you to continue.
The sentences are well-written, as most of your writing is, but I cannot picture this scene at all. It's confusing. Your writing is not usually confusing. You do have a gift for writing in English, though, and I encourage you to continue.
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Dear Mentor,
Thank you very much for your nice verses; so heavy are they with the meaning that I can not describe my gratitudes towards you.
I understand the reason of your confusion. Because one sentence is just the tip of an iceberg; I can imagine the frustrating situation while you try to grasp the meaning of it. Sorry for that.
But it is an honor to send you my story to grasp the w
Thank you very much for your nice verses; so heavy are they with the meaning that I can not describe my gratitudes towards you.
I understand the reason of your confusion. Because one sentence is just the tip of an iceberg; I can imagine the frustrating situation while you try to grasp the meaning of it. Sorry for that.
But it is an honor to send you my story to grasp the w
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