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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Dear Mr. X,

How are you? I navigated your website and found that I prefer MS in Hrm over MS in MIS. I think the MS in HRM program suits my career objectives better. Please do let me know the requirements and the deadline for international applicant.

-Thanks.

Please make any changes tht you think are appropriate. thanks in advance.
  

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Hi, Dear Mr. X, How are you? I navigated your website and found that I prefer MS in Hrm over MS in MIS.

  • Hi, Dear Mr.
  • X, How are you?
  • I navigated your website and found that I prefer MS in Hrm over MS in MIS.
  • I think the MS in HRM program suits my career objectives better.
  • Please do let me know the requirements and the deadline for international applicant.
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Hi,

Dear Mr. X,

How are you? I navigated your website and found that I prefer MS in Hrm over MS in MIS. I think the MS in HRM program suits my career objectives better. Please do let me know the requirements and the deadline for international applicant.

-Thanks.

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