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Nylaraj Posted 8 years ago
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I asked you to pass this book to a good copy editor. Because this book is a very important book and Ms Sara Johns acquisition aswell. The second edition sold very well with other Publishers. I was so upset when I saw the copy editors name on the word file. I had a very bad experienced with her not even one time.Plase redo the book pr pass to good and senior editors like Sooraj, Vishnu, Alex... Otherwise I don’t want to Pay for this book.

  

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nylaraj I asked you to pass this book to a good copy editor. Because this book is a very important book and Ms Sara Johns acquisition aswell. The second edition sold very well with other Publishers.

  • nylaraj I asked you to pass this book to a good copy editor.
  • Because this book is a very important book and Ms Sara Johns acquisition aswell.
  • The second edition sold very well with other Publishers.
  • I was so upset when I saw the copy editors name on the word file.
  • I had a very bad experienced with her not even one time.
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nylarajI asked you to pass this book to a good copy editor. Because this book is a very important book and Ms Sara Johns acquisition aswell. The second edition sold very well with other Publishers. I was so upset when I saw the copy editors name on the word file. I had a very bad experienced with her
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Your request is to check a sentence, but you don't indicate which one. The entire paragraph needs some help. See the following for my adjustments:

I asked you to pass this book to a good copy editor because this book is very important and is Ms. Sara John's acquisition as well. The second edition sold very well with other publishers. I was so upset when I saw the copy editor's name on th

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