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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Please check my sentence.
"Some long years back, when I would have absurd dreams of becoming a superhero, when I would run around our neighborhood with a face towel on my back, when I would wait all night for Santa Claus and wake up disappointed to find him gone, back when I was a naive child, I had thought of myself as a smart person."
Is there cohesion in my sentence? Does it even make any sense? Please help me improve it. Thanks.
Is there cohesion in my sentence? Does it even make any sense? Please help me improve it. Thanks.
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" Is there cohesion in my sentence? ' Yes Please help me improve it. Unless you have a particular reason for using Past Perfect, just say '.
- " Is there cohesion in my sentence?
- ' Yes Please help me improve it.
- Unless you have a particular reason for using Past Perfect, just say '.
- .
- I had thought of myself as a smart person'.
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Hi,
"Some long years back, when I would have absurd dreams of becoming a superhero, when I would run around our neighborhood with a face towel on my back, when I would wait all night for Santa Claus and wake up disappointed to find him gone, back when I was a naive child, I had thought of myself as a smart person."
Is there cohesion in my sentence?
"Some long years back, when I would have absurd dreams of becoming a superhero, when I would run around our neighborhood with a face towel on my back, when I would wait all night for Santa Claus and wake up disappointed to find him gone, back when I was a naive child, I had thought of myself as a smart person."
Is there cohesion in my sentence?
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