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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Please check my sentence.
Hello, is my sentence correct?
Eager to quench his thirst, Frank raise the glass to his mouth in readiness to taste
of the bitter sweetness, when a scream cut through the place, causing him to spill
most of his drink.
Eager to quench his thirst, Frank raise the glass to his mouth in readiness to taste
of the bitter sweetness, when a scream cut through the place, causing him to spill
most of his drink.
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In grammar it only has one error: raised , not raise. In style, it suffers badly from antiquated euphuism. Please simplify it considerably: John thirstily raised his glass when...
- In grammar it only has one error: raised , not raise.
- In style, it suffers badly from antiquated euphuism.
- Please simplify it considerably: John thirstily raised his glass when...
- etc.
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In grammar it only has one error: raised, not raise. In style, it suffers badly from antiquated euphuism. Please simplify it considerably: John thirstily raised his glass when....etc.
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In grammar it only has one error: raised, not raise. In style, it suffers badly from antiquated euphuism. Please simplify it considerably: John thirstily raised his glass when....etc.
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