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I'm trying improving my speaking skill, so can someone give some recommendations for me?

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I’m going to tell for you my favorite restaurant, which I often come over with my buddies. Its name is “GOGI GOGI” located in Cau Giay district. This restaurant belongs to Korea chain stores; and it specializes in serving grill buffet or hotpot. If you come there, you will like its glamorous decoration and friendly staffs. In addition, the food is marinated so well although I’m a fussy eater, it makes my mouth watering just see it. Hence, I always full up by the end. One of important things is the price. Its price is affordable for me and my friends. We often throw some parties as Christmas party or birthday party. Although there are many people, the restaurant has enough space for all, so I estimate 4.5 stars for it. If you wanna find a place to dine out, I recommend you should try it once. Maybe, you will like it as me.

Thanks in advance!

Teechr · Accepted Answer

I’m going to tell for you my favorite restaurant, which I often come over with my buddies. Its name is “GOGI GOGI” located in Cau Giay district. This restaurant belongs to Korea chain stores; and it specializes in serving grill buffet or hotpot. If you come there, you will like its glamorous decoration and friendly staffs. In addition, the food is marinated so well although I’m a fussy eater, it makes my mouth watering just see it. Hence, I always full up by the end. One of important things is the price. Its price is affordable for me and my friends. We often throw some parties as Christmas party or birthday party. Although there are many people, the restaurant has enough space for all, so I estimate 4.5 stars for it. If you wanna find a place to dine out, I recommend you should try it once. Maybe, you will like it as me.

Thanks in advance!

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I’m going to tell ~~for~~ you about my favorite restaurant, which I often ~~come over~~ go to with my buddies. Its name is “GOGI GOGI”, and it's located in Cau Giay District. This restaurant belongs to a Korean chain, ~~stores;~~ and it specializes in serving ~~grill~~ buffet grill or and hotpot. If you ~~come~~ go there, you will like its glamorous decoration and friendly staff. In addition, the food is marinated, ~~so well~~ and although I’m a fussy eater, it makes my mouth water ~~ing~~ just to see it. ~~Hence, I always full up by the end.~~ One of the important things about it is the price. ~~Its price~~ It is affordable for me and my friends. We often ~~throw some parties~~ go there on special occasions such as Christmas ~~party~~ or for a birthday. ~~party.~~ Although there are usually many people there, the restaurant has enough space for all. ~~so I estimate~~ I would give it 4.5 stars. ~~for it.~~ If you're looking for ~~wanna find~~ a place to dine out, I recommend Gogi Gogi. ~~you should try it once.~~ Maybe you will like it as much as I do. ~~me.~~

Please check my recording for me!

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