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Several reasons steming from students’ family also make a contribution to the increase of dropout rate. First, because of financial difficulties, a lot of children in remote areas such as Tay Bac, Tay Nguyen of Vietnam are forced to quite education and take up jobs to support their family. As a result, many children who are studying at school cannot pursue higher studies. Second, being addicted to online games, students had poor academic performance, and even they had to drop out of school. One of main reasons behind thus problem is that parents do not spend much time attending their children’s studying. This led to an increasing number of dropouts. The final reason is that some students tend to have the wrong idea of the purpose of studies. Most of them believe that the important target of studying is to get money, so they decide to leave school to start a new job which could help them temporarily make big money.