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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Please check my paragraph and right

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These days, there are many crazy weather like heavy raining and dry weather in the world. Someone suspects that the worse our life, the slower the action about them.
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I took an examination in English and wrote that paragraph.
Is this make sense?

The model answer is below;
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Recently, there have been frequent heavy rains and droughts around the world.Some people predict that our living conditions will worsen even more unless we take immediate action against such extreme weather.
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Top answer

Anonymous many crazy weather As a noun, "weather" is not countable. Also, avoid using words like "crazy" in formal or semi-formal contexts such as this. Anonymous Someone suspects that the worse our life, the slower the action about them.

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  • Anonymous many crazy weather As a noun, "weather" is not countable.
  • Also, avoid using words like "crazy" in formal or semi-formal contexts such as this.
  • Anonymous Someone suspects that the worse our life, the slower the action about them.
  • This is ungrammatical.
  • But more importantly, you're using this structure in an inverted way!
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Anonymousmany crazy weather
As a noun, "weather" is not countable. Also, avoid using words like "crazy" in formal or semi-formal contexts such as this.
AnonymousSomeone suspects that the worse our life, the slower the action about them.
This is ungrammatical. But more importantly, you're using this structure in an inverted w
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