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Creativeguru Posted 13 years ago
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please check my paragraph 2

The feel of purest happiness is like a rarest gem in the pool of diamonds, which you can hardly find. And indeed you do not have to search for it any more. Because it is in super abundance at Citty Paradiso.
  

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How about: Pure bliss, like the rarest of gems, is hard to find. Now you need not search any more, because it is available in abundance at Citty Paradiso. )

— Blue Jay

  • How about: Pure bliss, like the rarest of gems, is hard to find.
  • Now you need not search any more, because it is available in abundance at Citty Paradiso.
  • )
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How about:
Pure bliss, like the rarest of gems, is hard to find. Now you need not search any more, because it is available in abundance at Citty Paradiso.
(Did you mean City?)
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Actually just to add creative angel to it we had purposely kept double 't'

Thanks for your kind help
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