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Happiness is the only ultra-expensive luxury in life, which you can’t buy.
And you don’t have to search for it any more.
Because it is in abundance at Citty Paradiso.
This heavenly living offers you many first special moments of life

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GPY · Accepted Answer

What is Citty Paradiso?

Creativeguru · Answer

Citty Paradisi is the project name, It is basically Italian translation for the paradise city.

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GPY · Answer

But what is it?

The reason I ask is that if this is a marketing message for a holiday resort or residential development or something like that -- something that you have to pay for -- then the message doesn't make sense. It is essentially saying "money can't buy happiness, but, by the way, if you give us some money we can make you happy".

Creativeguru · Answer

True I actually fully agree with you. But it's just a piece of creative writing to entice buyers
If you could tell me how is over all grammar and style of writing here

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GPY · Answer

The minimum grammatical correction necessary in the first line is the deletion of the comma. However, an "ultra-expensive luxury which you can’t buy" does not make sense since "ultra-expensive" implies monetary cost. Even deleting the word "ultra-expensive" doesn't fix it since "Happiness is the only luxury in life which you can't buy" is a false statement, even if one allows that happiness is a "luxury", which seems doubtful. A rethink about what you are trying to say seems necessary.

The second and third lines are correct English, but check the spelling of "Citty Paradiso" (you've spelt it in two different ways above, and "Citty" does not look like an Italian word to me).

The last line is awkward and unidiomatic. Unfortunately I cannot see an obvious easy fix.

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