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Teacher, I am writing to a personnel agency requesting their help.

I will be leaving XX Company end of this month. I met with you a week before I accepted the job at XX Company in November of last year. This job is not working out and the reason I am leaving is the long commute each day to work. I am interested to apply for positions located In Shim Tsaw area. If there are any suitable positions, could you please email them to me for my consideration.