Please check my motivation letter for PhD scholarship.Thanks!

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00Can someone please check my motivation letter for a PhD scholarship? Is the content OK or I should be more specific in some parts. It's very important for me to get this scholarship, otherwise I wouldn’t be able to continue to my PhD. 02br
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00Thank you in advance for all comments.02br
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00Dear Sirs,02br
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00I’m a (01b00MK02b00) PhD student, at the 01b00University 102b00, 01b00department 102b00. With this letter I would like to apply for PhD scholarship for foreign students.02br
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00I came here last year, as a result of collaboration between the 01b00Faculty 102b00, and 01b00Faculty 202b00, working in a project (01b00project name02b00)01b00.02b00 The aim of the project is developing and controlling orthoses for upper and lower limbs for elderly people, and people with neuromuscular disease. In this way the quality of their life and the social cost of these disabilities will be reduced. This orthoses can also be used in rehabilitation purposes. During my stay here, I meet a wonderful people, professors and colleges, who help me to accommodate here and to feel like home. I was also very satisfied with the working conditions here, and with the result that we accomplished on this project. 02br
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00I have always been interested in research in bioengineering, especially if it is closely related with helping people. During my BSc studies I was involved in several project connected with bioengineering. But in my country, unfortunately, there is a very small chance to work in that field. The chance that I got here was like a dream that becomes true. Encouraged from all the colleges and professors from department at the faculty, with whom I worked, an also with support from my family, I decided to enter the PhD research program at the 01b00University 102b00. I successfully pass the PhD exam, and was elected as one of the students who can participate in PhD research program at this university.02br
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00My plans now are to continue with hard work and to accomplished as much as possible in the field of bioengineering which is in function of improving human lives. I finally had a chance to use my theoretical knowledge practically. 02br
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00Beside my research activities, I like to travel. I like your country, and during this year I learned a lot about her history and culture. I also attended language courses in order to learn your language and better understand your habits. I’m also fluent in English, Serbian and Croatian. My previous working experience in an international multilanguage company helped me to easily adapt to new environment. I have also learned the commitment necessary for success as an individual and how to work as a team member.02br
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00Considering my qualifications and interests (exposed above and in my CV), I think that I’m suitable person to get the scholarship, which will help me to continue with my research activities. 02br
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00Yours faithfully,02br
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00Natasa.0-