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Milad880 Posted 12 years ago
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Please check my motivation letter for application.Tell me weaknesses or Ideas...
I am xxx and writing to express my intrest in applying for the master's deree programme in Civil Engeeniring starting in sommer 2015 semester.
In the early levels of education I found in myself Curiosity, excellent performance in solving mathematical problems and enthusiasm for using them in everyday’s life. Influences of computations and practical experiences all in all in one tangible and important complex in everyday’s life, led me to select civil engineering as my field of study in university. My father’s profession as a supervision and executer of civil projects helped me to have a close-up view from issues of my favorite field of study and its workplace. As a result I entered to this field with a more determined mind.
Before entering to university I had worked up in different construction sites in Shiraz and also HSE department of Shiraz refinery for more efficient training of myself. Because I wanted a practical experience besides educational training in my home town I select university of science and research of Fars for graduates’ studies due to its short distance from Shiraz city.
University lessons helped me to perform better in work related activities. In college, fondly, I research on different subjects in cooperation of my classmates such as Environmental contamination of oil industry especially in Shiraz refinery and the sewage purification plan, which came into operation in 2002 at this location. Performing of a training project in workgroups can have a much higher efficiency and attractions in compare with individual working that is even sometimes boring. in addition, I start learning different software such as xxx, xxx and xxx to develop my performance and completion of my training projects.
The poor quality of education, especially in the practical field and dedicating a larg share of industry cycle to the experimental instead of educated group caused me to become intrested in studying abroad. High quality of modulus in education, affordable tuition and accentuate attracting foreign students by implementing plans like xxx, these Strengths Convinced me to see Germany appropriate choise.
I found TU Aachen a good respons to my intrest of studying due to some reasons like having the best industrial university trait in Germany,being member of TU9 and possibility to earn money through research projects.Location of xxx city and encouragement from some of my freinds who are studying in xxx are the other reasons that I can mention.Because of my passion in scientific and practical background that I have, I would very much like to get this apportunity and I am sure to exceed your expectations, because of both my academic and interpersonal skills as well as the experience gained from my internship. I hope that studying at the xxx will help me reach my goals.Farthermore I would like to deepen my knowledge in the field of Water management and all other aspects connected with those field and also improve my potential and creativity by working in a team.
Thanking you for considering my application and looking forward to your positive reply.
my name
In the early levels of education I found in myself Curiosity, excellent performance in solving mathematical problems and enthusiasm for using them in everyday’s life. Influences of computations and practical experiences all in all in one tangible and important complex in everyday’s life, led me to select civil engineering as my field of study in university. My father’s profession as a supervision and executer of civil projects helped me to have a close-up view from issues of my favorite field of study and its workplace. As a result I entered to this field with a more determined mind.
Before entering to university I had worked up in different construction sites in Shiraz and also HSE department of Shiraz refinery for more efficient training of myself. Because I wanted a practical experience besides educational training in my home town I select university of science and research of Fars for graduates’ studies due to its short distance from Shiraz city.
University lessons helped me to perform better in work related activities. In college, fondly, I research on different subjects in cooperation of my classmates such as Environmental contamination of oil industry especially in Shiraz refinery and the sewage purification plan, which came into operation in 2002 at this location. Performing of a training project in workgroups can have a much higher efficiency and attractions in compare with individual working that is even sometimes boring. in addition, I start learning different software such as xxx, xxx and xxx to develop my performance and completion of my training projects.
The poor quality of education, especially in the practical field and dedicating a larg share of industry cycle to the experimental instead of educated group caused me to become intrested in studying abroad. High quality of modulus in education, affordable tuition and accentuate attracting foreign students by implementing plans like xxx, these Strengths Convinced me to see Germany appropriate choise.
I found TU Aachen a good respons to my intrest of studying due to some reasons like having the best industrial university trait in Germany,being member of TU9 and possibility to earn money through research projects.Location of xxx city and encouragement from some of my freinds who are studying in xxx are the other reasons that I can mention.Because of my passion in scientific and practical background that I have, I would very much like to get this apportunity and I am sure to exceed your expectations, because of both my academic and interpersonal skills as well as the experience gained from my internship. I hope that studying at the xxx will help me reach my goals.Farthermore I would like to deepen my knowledge in the field of Water management and all other aspects connected with those field and also improve my potential and creativity by working in a team.
Thanking you for considering my application and looking forward to your positive reply.
my name
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