please check my motivation letter.

Hellow, I have written a motivation letter, for the first time, so I am sure, that it is far from being perfect. please check it and give me advices.

Dear Mr/Mrs,

I am a citizen of Georgia. I have always dreamed about to get education abroad and what about LLM course, German is perfect choice, as the law systems of our countries are quite close to each other.

First I learnt About The Europa-Institut Saarland University while browsing the internet. Than I started gathering information on you. Later I met a Georgian boy, who had taken a month course at your university and he persuaded me, to apply you by all means, as Saarlandes enjoys a high reputation, is ranked as the “top university in Germany for internationality of training”, imparts highest quality education and is very convenient for me, as I want to take LLM course in Germany, but in English. So I have great desire to take this course at your university, because I am motivated to evolve constantly and to equip myself with the knowledge and power to succeed in the future

I am applying you for the LLM program in English, for the period of 2008-2009 academic years. Recently, I have graduated with a bachelor degree in jurispudence from Ivane Javaxishvili Tbilisi State university. I continued to study here and now I am Master student and I will graduate it by the end of 2008 year.

I also have proof of good knowledge of English language (TOEFL IBT certificate). Unfortunately I do not know German, but I will start studying it as soon as I arrive in Germany, so I think it will not be great obstacle for admission, as whole course is studied in English.

Besides, this academic education, I used to take private lessons in English (for 9 years). I have taken TOEFL course at International Training and Education Centre (ETI), also have taken Cambridge certificate course at school Mayflower.

Despite of the theoretical education, I have a little practical experience too. I have worked on probation for 15 weeks at the Appellate Court of Tbilisi and have just finished the course. Through this period I have developed excellent communication skills, as I used to have everyday contact with people of different nations and different social conditions. I can also say, that I am a real workaholic, purposeful, creative, adaptable, confident, with strong organizational skills. During the bachelor course, I have had a variety of social activities all of which have required me to work as part of a team to problem solve with cooperative attitude, so I have good team working skills

Additionally, I want say, that I have visited your web site and learned, that the The Europa-Institut Saarland University offers special study units as part of the LL.M. I am delighted with this opportunity, as I am very much interested in European Economic Law and you offer this course.

If you need additional information, you can reach me at +995 --------------(mobile) or +995 --------------(Landline) during the day . I can also be reached by e-mail

at mailto:---------@yahoo.com. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely, ----------- -----------------