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Flower1234 Posted 14 years ago
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Please check my letter to my dentist

Teacher, please check my letter. Thank you.

Dear Doctor

I have received a copy of your records. On page 1 of the records, I see that the dates of the three entries are the same, that is dated January 15, 2011: That is incorrect. I have made notes of my visits. The correct dates should be February 15, 2011, March 15, 2011 and May 15, 2011.
  

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You will cause instant irritation by directly calling someone incorrect. In English as in any language, a little courtesy will get you farther than confrontation. Dear Dr [surname], I have received a copy of your records.

  • You will cause instant irritation by directly calling someone incorrect.
  • In English as in any language, a little courtesy will get you farther than confrontation.
  • Dear Dr [surname], I have received a copy of your records.
  • On page 1, I see that the three entries are all dated January 15, but according to my notes, the dates should be February 15, March 15, and May 15 .
  • Could you please check this and let me know?
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You will cause instant irritation by directly calling someone incorrect. In English as in any language, a little courtesy will get you farther than confrontation.

Dear Dr [surname],

I have received a copy of your records. On page 1, I see that the three entries are all dated January 15, but according to my notes, the dates should be February 15, March 15,

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