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Mzca Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Please check my letter for any kinda error(logical, technical or gramatical etc..)..Thanks

0Dear Sirs,02br
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01b00 02b00Subject: 01u00Visa Validity Issue02u00 00 02br
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00I intended to stay 4 weeks in Canada got visa for 4 weeks as well. I face dates mix-up and ignoring of my intended date of travel. Dates detail is:00 02br
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00Valid from 22/03/08 until 21/04/0802br
00Issued on 29/03/0802br
00And I’m informed to collect passport on 03/04/08.02br
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00The issue is02br
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00 00-00 00visa validity that is about 4 weeks, starts 12 days before I’m informed to collect passport. 02br
00-00 00visa issued one week after starting of its validity.02br
00-00 00ignoring the intended date of travel (i.e. 2nd week of May 2k8) mentioned in the letter submitted along passport after winning the appeal.02br
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00I'm unable to travel because visa validity will be over before my intended date of travel and also less days in hand. 00Please reissue visa accordingly 02br
00my 00intended date of travel. The same letter of intended date of travel is attached.00 02br
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00Thanks & oblige02br
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00Sincerely02br
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00 00 0-
  

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02br 00Dear Sirs,02br 01b 00 02b 00Subject: 01u 00Visa Validity Issue02u 01span 02span 01span 00 02span 01span 00 02span 02br 02br 01span 02span 01span 00I 01b 00had02b 00 intended to stay 4 weeks in Canada 01b 00and applied for a visa 02b 00for 4 weeks as well01b 00. 02span 02br 02br 01span 00The issue is 01b 00that:02b 02br 02span 02br 02br 01span 02span 01span 00-00 01b 00the02b 00 02span 01span 00visa validity01b 00 of 02b 00about 4 weeks, starts 12 days before01b 00 I was advised02b 00 to collect passport. e.

  • 02br 00Dear Sirs,02br 01b 00 02b 00Subject: 01u 00Visa Validity Issue02u 01span 02span 01span 00 02span 01span 00 02span 02br 02br 01span 02span 01span 00I 01b 00had02b 00 intended to stay 4 weeks in Canada 01b 00and applied for a visa 02b 00for 4 weeks as well01b 00.
  • 02span 02br 02br 01span 00The issue is 01b 00that:02b 02br 02span 02br 02br 01span 02span 01span 00-00 01b 00the02b 00 02span 01span 00visa validity01b 00 of 02b 00about 4 weeks, starts 12 days before01b 00 I was advised02b 00 to collect passport.
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  • 02span 02br 02br 00I'm unable to travel because01b 00 the02b 00 visa 01b 00will be invalid02b 00 before my intended date of travel01b 00; it also permits of fewer days than requested02b 00.
  • 01span 00Please reissue visa 01b 00to accord with02b 00 my 02span 01span 00intended 01b 00dates 02b 00of travel.
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