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Ztq3 Posted 13 years ago
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Please check my Letter asking for donations

Several islands in the Philippines have been devastated by the most powerul typhoon ever recorded and as such it is in dire need of help. About 10,000 people reported dead, and many people are still missing. Many homes, schools, and buildings were destroyed, people do not have clean water to drink, not enough food to eat, and they do not have comfortable place to stay. There is a widespread damage to roads, electricity and communication are down.
For this reason, I am asking thosr who can, to please help in making a donation for the people who were affected by this calamity. I will send the donations to World Vision, a nonprofit organization that helps countries that suffered from natural disaster. They also help children from poor families to have a better life.
Thank you in advance for your help,
  

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Several islands in the Philippines have been devastated by the most powerful typhoon ever recorded and as such they are in dire need of help. About 10,000 people are reported dead, and many people are still missing. Many homes, schools, and buildings were destroyed .

  • Several islands in the Philippines have been devastated by the most powerful typhoon ever recorded and as such they are in dire need of help.
  • About 10,000 people are reported dead, and many people are still missing.
  • Many homes, schools, and buildings were destroyed .
  • People do not have clean water to drink, not enough food to eat, and they do not have comfortable place s to stay.
  • There is a widespread damage to roads, electricity and communication systems are down .
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Several islands in the Philippines have been devastated by the most powerful typhoon ever recorded and as such they are in dire need of help. About 10,000 people are reported dead, and many people are still missing. Many homes, schools, and buildings were destroyed. People do not have clean water to drink, not enough food t
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Than you alpheccaStars!
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Perhaps you might include information on how to donate directly to World Vision.?

Are you going to send this letter to strangers, or to people who know you well?

Clive
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I will send this to my coworkers. Thanks Clive!

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