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Dear Cecilia,
(Please see in English below. ) (Is this the correct way to say see English version below? I am writing a letter first in Swedish, but I don't know if Cecilia does understand Swedish.)
Warmly welcome to the Human Rights Defenders!
You filled out the application for membership of the Human Rights Defenders at the Women for Human Rights event on the 6th of March. I am sending you the attached invoice for the membership fee. Please use the invoice reference number when paying it. I will add you to our mailing list.
Welcome to follow the Human Rights Defenders on Facebook and Twitter (the attached links below). There we are sharing news, articles and other information on human rights.
Applying for the Human Rights Defenders' building camp has begun. Next summer Palestinians, Israelis and international activists will build a community center and water pipe in the Palestinian villages. Please find more information on our website [the link to our website].
Tomorrow (on Saturday the 1st of April) Oscar Johansson, chair of Human Rights Defenders, and Lucas Andersson, chair of International Solidarity Work, will be discussing colonialism at the Social Forum of Sweden in Café String (Nytorgsgatan 38) at 5 PM. Welcome! (I mean that this is an event there these two people are discussing colonialism. Social Forum of Sweden is the festival and there is many discussions and other events. This discussion is part of the Social Forum and the topic of the discussion is colonialism.)
Kind regards,
Julia Andersson
treasurer of Human Rights Defenders
A warm welcome to Human Rights Defenders! You applied for membership in Human Rights Defenders at the Women for Human Rights event on the 6th of March. I am attaching an invoice for the membership fee.
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A warm welcome to Human Rights Defenders!
You applied for membership in Human Rights Defenders at the Women for Human Rights event on the 6th of March. I am attaching an invoice for the membership fee. Please cite the invoice number when remitting. I will add you to our mailing list.
Please follow Human Rights Defenders on Facebook and Twitter (links below)