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Akm2446 Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
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Dear John,
I am writing this letter to response your letter that you ask me some advices and information about spending a two-week holiday in my region.
First of all, I suggest you only stay in a five star hotel in my region. I could find some cheap hotels for you with great facilities. I recommend you Crystal hotel, it is a very nice place.
In addition, I recommend you to schedule your trip to arrive here at morning. Consequently, you will be able to get your hotel room as fast as possible. Also, you should bring your money in US Dollar because you could exchange it to my local currency easily.
Finally, as you mentioned in your letter, you will come here on August 15. I have to say weather might be too hot on that time. I advise you only bring cold clothes in your baggage.
Please let me know about your decision.
All the best,
Ben.
An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- offer to find somewhere to stay
- give advice about what to do
- give information about what clothes to bring
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Dear John,
I am writing this letter to response your letter that you ask me some advices and information about spending a two-week holiday in my region.
First of all, I suggest you only stay in a five star hotel in my region. I could find some cheap hotels for you with great facilities. I recommend you Crystal hotel, it is a very nice place.
In addition, I recommend you to schedule your trip to arrive here at morning. Consequently, you will be able to get your hotel room as fast as possible. Also, you should bring your money in US Dollar because you could exchange it to my local currency easily.
Finally, as you mentioned in your letter, you will come here on August 15. I have to say weather might be too hot on that time. I advise you only bring cold clothes in your baggage.
Please let me know about your decision.
All the best,
Ben.
Top answer
I have underlined some problem areas in your letter. ): Dear John, I am writing this letter to response your lett er that you ask me some advices and information about spending a two-week holiday in my region. First of all, I suggest you only stay in a five star hotel in my region.
- I have underlined some problem areas in your letter.
- ): Dear John, I am writing this letter to response your lett er that you ask me some advices and information about spending a two-week holiday in my region.
- First of all, I suggest you only stay in a five star hotel in my region.
- I could find some cheap hotels for you with great facilities.
- I recommend you Crystal hotel, it is a very nice place.
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I have underlined some problem areas in your letter. In addition, you did not give any advice about what to do (this means sightseeing, etc.):
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to response your letter that you ask me some advices and information about spending a two-week holiday in my region.
First of all, I suggest you only stay in a five
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to response your letter that you ask me some advices and information about spending a two-week holiday in my region.
First of all, I suggest you only stay in a five
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