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Horatesh Posted 20 years ago
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please, check my letter

here I sent a letter of motivation, please somebody check it, i will thank you a lot

Dear Academic Committee on Admissions Members,

During five years I studied Environmental Sciences and Ecodevelopment at XXX. The emphasis of my studies was on understanding the interactions between people and environment and finding alternatives to conserve the natural resources.

For me, studying at XXX will be an exciting and challenging experience, I am particularly attracted to this programme because my country has a very high biodiversity, actually it presents an increasingly loss due the human activities; I am sure that with this master I will be able to contribute with the local and global efforts in solving this matter.

As part of my studies, I have been involved in various projects and activities about conservation, these allowed me to apply the theoretical skills in a real field work, now I feel that I have relevant skills and experiences to carry out this MSc. programme.

To further my career aspirations of improving the conservation efforts of my country, I want to obtain a Master's Degree in XXX. This knowledge will allow me to better understand management principles. I believe that natural resources management must have a solid understanding, supported by a strong academic foundation, of how to fit conservation and development.

Yours sincerely,

My name
  

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Horatesh here I sent a letter of motivation, please somebody check it, i will thank you a lot Dear Academic Committee on Admissions Members, During five years I studied Environmental Sciences and Ecodevelopment at ***. The emphasis of my studies was on understanding the interactions between people and environment and finding alternatives to conserve the natural resources. For me, studying at *** will be an exciting and challenging experience, I am particularly attracted to this programme because my country has a very high biodiversity, actually it presents an increasingly loss due the human activities; I am sure that with this master I will be able to contribute with the local and global efforts in solving this matter.

  • Horatesh here I sent a letter of motivation, please somebody check it, i will thank you a lot Dear Academic Committee on Admissions Members, During five years I studied Environmental Sciences and Ecodevelopment at ***.
  • The emphasis of my studies was on understanding the interactions between people and environment and finding alternatives to conserve the natural resources.
  • For me, studying at *** will be an exciting and challenging experience, I am particularly attracted to this programme because my country has a very high biodiversity, actually it presents an increasingly loss due the human activities; I am sure that with this master I will be able to contribute with the local and global efforts in solving this matter.
  • As part of my studies, I have been involved in various projects and activities about conservation, these allowed me to apply the theoretical skills in a real field work, now I feel that I have relevant skills and experiences to carry out this MSc.
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Horatesh
here I sent a letter of motivation, please somebody check it, i will thank you a lot

Dear Academic Committee on Admissions Members,

During five years I studied Environmental Sciences and Ecodevelopment at ***. The emphasis of my studies was on understanding the interactions between people and environment and finding alternatives
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hello,

thank you very much for your suggestions, I have considered them

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