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M7madpt Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please check my language

Hello everybody, i still learning Enlish language ,I wrote what i did today ,i need someone to check my language:
I waked up at 8.30,i complete? the film that i watched yesterday,then i made my coffee and drank it with chocolate.
after that i went to bathroom to take shower to prepare my self to go to pray,after it finished i went to hair cutter to shave my beard ,then i went to restaurant to take my lunch ,i took rice with chicken;, then passed to supermarket to take cegarettes . After finished i went back to home.
when i put the lunch it was cold for that i was going to heat it,
after finished i went to take a snooze.
please i know there is alote of wrongs and weak in the language just tell me the write way. Thanks alote
  

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Hello everybody, I still am learning En g lish language. ( or , the English language ). I wrote down what I did today, I need someone to check my language .

— Anonymous

  • Hello everybody, I still am learning En g lish language.
  • ( or , the English language ).
  • I wrote down what I did today, I need someone to check my language .
  • 30, I complete?
  • finished watching the film that I was watching yesterday, then I made my coffee and drank it with chocolate.
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Hello everybody, I still am learning English language. (or, the English language). I wrote down what I did today,
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Thanks a lot Mr Anonymous, can I send any object I write it to you please? Because really I need to improve my language.
I am Physiotherapist,I worked with Arabic staff but now i traveled and contracted with another hospital and all dealing with English language, Now I facing a real difficulties with dealing with them. Thanks for helping
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