Please check my introduction paragraph

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The reason why I am writing this essay is because I really would like to attend the University of Georgia. I am the person who always thinls about her future, that is why I tried to make my best in high school, earning good grades and learning as much as I can to be well prepared for college. The quality I like best in myself is that I am always planning and thinking about my future to achieve all of my goals. One of the things I like the least about me is that sometimes I don't use good organization for my studies, but I will try to use better study skills to make my best at college.

Sya_tesl · Accepted Answer

well...i think your introductory para is suitable for the application...you have written all about your experiences and if i am one of their board...i think i will consider your application...but...it just from my own view...anyway....good luck for your future...bye...

Anonymous · Answer

Hi

Your introduction paragraph is good, but you need thesis statement to make readers know what you are going to talk about. It's important sentence that you have to write in your introduction paragraph.

ALOLO · Answer

Critics argue that intelligence is the only thing that reflects your grades, but I argue that it is effort that reflects your grade. Prepared to be mind blown because people are proving it wrong every single day. Ability refers to what you can do. Grades measure what you actually did in that particular class. Many students do far less/worse work in their courses than they are capable of doing. Grades reflect effort, not intelligence.

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Anonymous · Answer

Two years ago my brother wasn’t doing good in school. My mom made him play a sport and he choose the sport basketball. At first he didn’t like the sport but he continued to play basketball. Ever since my brother has been playing basketball he has started passing all his classes and he has been healthier than he was before. Children should be required to learn and play at least one sport. Making sports required to children has benefits some benefits are children could have more achievement in school, could help children stay healthy, and it could help improve eye-hand coordination.

Pen teal 647 · Answer

Jen is being held in a student court, because she allegedly punched a girl named Marie in the face, because there was a Instagram post, which was a picture of Jim and Marie talking and Holly was excited about the news and took pictures of them which was spread all over the school and Instagram.

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Bee slide 206 · Answer

My name is shiv.I am living in shivaji nagar. I am an undergraduate. Actually, I was pursuing my graduation but I had left my graduation due to some family crisis and financial issues.I have more than one year of experience as a customer service executive.As far as my family concerned we are four members in my family, my father, mother, brother and me. By profession my father, he is a farmer, the mother she is a housewife and My younger brother, he is an electrician.About my hobbies, I love watching meaningful English TV shows and learning new things.Thanks for giving me the opportunityfor introducing myself.

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