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Akm2446 Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Please check my informal letter (Thanks in advance)
You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:
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Dear John,
How is it going? I am writing this letter to let you know about a surprise party that I would like to hold it for Peter. As you know, Peter failed in the Math exam last week and he is very upset now. I thought that it would be great idea if I make him happy in this way.
I planned to hold this party on Peter's birthday on June 18, 2011. Peter will come to school at 8 am every day. So I think that we should attend to school before him at 7 am. We should prepare many things for the party as fast as we can.
Finally, We will need some meals, drinks and balloons for this party. So, I think that all classmates could bring some things with themselves. We could write all required items on a paper and then everyone select one item.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Bob.
- explain the reason for the party
- give the date and time of the party
- suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
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Dear John,
How is it going? I am writing this letter to let you know about a surprise party that I would like to hold it for Peter. As you know, Peter failed in the Math exam last week and he is very upset now. I thought that it would be great idea if I make him happy in this way.
I planned to hold this party on Peter's birthday on June 18, 2011. Peter will come to school at 8 am every day. So I think that we should attend to school before him at 7 am. We should prepare many things for the party as fast as we can.
Finally, We will need some meals, drinks and balloons for this party. So, I think that all classmates could bring some things with themselves. We could write all required items on a paper and then everyone select one item.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Bob.
Top answer
Dear akm2446, This was a very good effort but I have made some suggestions in a new edition of your letter below. Take care to follow the instructions more closely. You may have misunderstood the fifth and final requirement concerning the content of your letter.
- Dear akm2446, This was a very good effort but I have made some suggestions in a new edition of your letter below.
- Take care to follow the instructions more closely.
- You may have misunderstood the fifth and final requirement concerning the content of your letter.
- You were required to suggest what the classmate (not classmate s ) could bring to the party.
- Finally, the instructions for your letter should have told you to include where the surprise party would be held.
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Dear akm2446,
This was a very good effort but I have made some suggestions in a new edition of your letter below. Take care to follow the instructions more closely. You may have misunderstood the fifth and final requirement concerning the content of your letter. You were required to suggest what the classmate (not classmates) could bring to the party.
Finally, the instruct
This was a very good effort but I have made some suggestions in a new edition of your letter below. Take care to follow the instructions more closely. You may have misunderstood the fifth and final requirement concerning the content of your letter. You were required to suggest what the classmate (not classmates) could bring to the party.
Finally, the instruct
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Dear John Parris,
Thanks a lot, you right, I have to read instructions carefully.
Regards,
Ali.
Thanks a lot, you right, I have to read instructions carefully.
Regards,
Ali.
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